Return, after pleasing modify again send.The reason of backing the draft includes three:
It a, the headline isn't refreshing, there is no attraction.Read to see skin son, see the text see a son, Sir it 《long hate song 》 , suddenly a see headline vacant incomprehensible, don't since the reader's interest in the reading lead.Not if go straight to a topic outstanding point, simply change to 《grandfather son daughter-in-law** record 》or 《 the gorgeous imperial concubine bleed Ma Wei Po 》, 《 a story of women and two men 》 .
It two, describe thick Shu, language how not known.Yang Gui Fei is one of four greatest beauties in China, her food and clothing lives line and life Mi to smell, personal privacy, become the focus that people pay attention to naturally.She is in pure pond in R.O.C how"hot springs water is slippery to wash a Ning fat" of?Does she believe in with Tang Xuan how "lotus debt warm degree night of pleasure"?Her large milk how drive Anne does the papaya shot of the Lu mountain harm?Hers 《the secondary rainbow clothes feather dress dance 》 is a Bikini to perform still strip tease?……Clear up these problem for uncover Mi history in the temple court and clarify a history riddle case, study prosperous culture Tangs to all be of great benefit.But the Sir is in these key places, or use spring style of writing 1 pen once took, or kept secret for beautiful Hui for autumn, hardly realizing here is exactly "poem eye", actually write, detailed write, capital letter, close-up, much more all-directions angle ground write, delicacy extremely the minute particle fully expose of write.Don't fearing space is long, I can give you the layout of printed sheet for leaving 30,000 words.Certainly, owing to currently"the breeze is tight", "next three roadses"s' once describing over and leading to expose parties concerned perhaps will seek to come, the Sir can come to at the important place hasty put on brakes, use"□□□□(Here delete the word of × ×"of extremely recruit son, can immediately take off a relation like this, obtain the art effect of"here have no word prosperous have a word" again.
It three, details are mild, lack art imagination dint.The Sir ties down by a historical records too much, don't dare more the boundary half tread, "reality" enough to spare but"romance" shortage.The gentleman disappears showbiz slice 《the new beam wishes 》 , beam mountain uncle with wish an English set already not and in former days the image of text weak scholar, a change but become martial superior Lin of acrobatic feats.Depend on at under my opinion, after 《long hate song 》 details of half department can thus"the drama say:Yang Gui Fei suddenly springs up 《the secondary rainbow clothes feather dress dance 》 when Ma Wei Po's mutiny will hang to death, this dance unexpectedly is Wu Lin's effort, compare little Lin Quan iron filings Zhang severe hundredfold.The gold lotus kicks a person's head to roll, the jade hand dance seasonal delicacy blood, expensive imperial concubine's single-handed kills a several depths besieged, Wu life limits of the earth, east the Du hand mulberry.Because life forces to degenerate dust of journey to work as a prostitute brothel, momentary ex- noisy traffic in the door is dense, the day enters a Dou gold suddenly become rich old woman.Remember fondly Xuan and believe in because of going to country a long distance, hence multiply by a Boeing 777 return Chang-an, proper believe in with Xuan while growing and livinging a palace and handing over a joys, suddenly the moxa Zi attack makes, abrupt death and Xuan believe in a bosom in ……
The above my opinion only provides a reference and asks a Sir to after modifying the manuscript urgent send, the Bi publishes will at under expect is headlines Be solemn and impressive to release, and gather knot to publication, the income Bi publishes of speech feeling the series series 《well-dressed ladies joss-stick 》 is medium, Bi the publishing definitely and with all sincerity contribute efforts to the Sir and make Sir's name once again glorious, Sir's your work heavy put strange burst of color.
Have a words really ashamed start to talk, however, said that I think that you will also comprehend.That be, the Bi publishes just foundation, funds limited, lately again fell in an of making Huang Fan Huang but be punished many silvers two, at present cash-strapped, if the Sir wanted to send report, book, gave beard pay review read a fee, edited a fee, published a fee, printed a fee added up to CNY 8888.(Sir if having already opened a dollar treasure 5188 money foot Yis is then)In consideration of you were a celebrity, my returning was special discount for you 50%, please keep secret, don't expose bottom son for other writer.Only small money, for you this once served as a Xing department the department class leadership of book still say, isn't a small vegetables is a disc of ear?
It is thriving to expect your your work and money.
《The daughter is red 》 Huang in the magazine agency edits
The × year × month × day
The text chapter 4003 Three Kingdoms/make track for a thief/screen'dead'
Renew time:2009-2-2817:05:10 chapter word numbers:1569
The bore arrives at clearly east Wu, Sun Quan sends Lu Su to go toward accolade in person and go into"gentle and soft country" five-star guest house.After host and guest exchanges greeting, the Lu Su says clearly to the bore:"The Sir must use such as the Qiao tongue of Huang lord male persuasion, the Su had the gold throat larynx treasure, grass coral to contain a slice, 39 stomach Tais here, soon the effect saves heart pill and remit a Ren kidney treasure ……, be provided for Sir to provide for use."The bore talks clearly:"The Cao holds this old scoundrel, really isn't a thing, he wants to make a list pole world, dominate in the world, drive I two chase on fire totally embarassed still deathless heart, battle wear the wealth atmosphere is thick, come to make again what fight area defense, Jing state of Liu Zong 's this stupid goods pull pass by.Liu Huang Shu doesn't listen to my advice, have been wanting peaceful solution.Fact proves, this can in the gun pole political power.You trust, I definitely say Sun Zhong strive for to feel that the Cao holds is held him the big personal enemy of 18 ancestors."Both parties talked a short while again, the Lu Su took leave, faced to walk and flattered a form:"The Sir likes a rest, we have a kTV compartment here and leap Di, water etc., does the young lady go along with?"Originally Sun Quan wants to pull Zhuge Liang in the past, Shi Chu bait of beautiful woman."Good ……very tired, I still want view view natural phenomena and hear that the Cao held to spend a huge sum to deliver a thing arrives Mars up, even the bubbles have never vomited 1 to wash Be getting more white."Zhuge Liang makes the answer way of whole body sense of right kind.
A night have no words, the second day, Sun Quan sent the wagon of the luxurious Gsi300 of three horses to pick up Zhuge Liang.Arrived Sun Quan's official residence, saw a top a piece of big Bian, last book:"Behave a people service" a few hot gold big word,cheap beats by dre.
Enter door, Sun Quan Yi sees Zhuge Liang, shout:"Hello, there is oil very all, beat a dog to take off bore."A see Sun Quan hold an E text, Zhuge Liang doesn't show as well weak:"It is vexed, kill an oil.""Bore the clear Sir come my humble country, greatly honored.Currently east the breeze blow, war drum Lei, the economic situation one is greatly good, under the circumstance of stock index one Xie a long distance, we want to develop to speak politics, speak sense of right and speak ……speak ……this , certainly, also wants to speak to eat to speak to drink to speak to play, the material civilization also wants to speak.Want two hands to all want to grasp, two hands all have to be hard …… (slightly go 15000 words as follows)"Sun Quan did three hours and 17 minutes of opening remarks, on Zhuge Liang 13 toilets, beat 17 gapes, somehow didn't fall asleep.But that general text the martial big minister have a dozen to shout of, have hand over a head to connect an ear to speak a yellow joke of, and then sit upright such as the bodhisattva elephant but tour by imagination a long distance.
Finally, Sun Quan finished speaking.The whole field waits Zhuge Liang's speech solemnly silent.Good the bore is clear, in no hurrily stand up, "first, appreciate that Sun Zhong strives for the Sir's great kindness hospitality.I sincerely represent Liu Huang Shu and all officers and men mean a sincere salute to your leadership and the people, and invite Sun Zhong to strive for Sir at appropriate of time visit ……interview …….The Wu temporarily returns without definite residence.(Big hand a flick)in fine, two country people's deep feelings leave no room for doubt.Now, current situation is ……"on listenning to this words, the that text martial big minister starts beating to shout again, speak a yellow joke, tour by imagination ten thousand inside.Zhang Zhao, attend to Yong 2 people but sneer at in one, Sun Quan takes out novel to with relish look.
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A person livings for"fast runner" and runs specially and quickly, and usually vaunts before person with this.
Once, his house was stolen, he hurriedly ran to make track for a thief.His Gao Han Dao while seeing thief's person's figure:"Do not run, you say what also run however I!"In a little while, he indeed as expected caught up thief person, but still a strength ground keeps on running.
Halfway last someone ask him to run so urgently dry what, he says to make track for a thief.Ask him again, the thief ran where, he satisfiedly says:"I have already exceeded him and saw, now even his shadow also sees be missing
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I once received such a telephone when an ISP company works:
"How do you do!Excuse me, are you what is up?"
"I am to occupy and seek you!You why let my calculator keep opening, pass?"
"Open, pass calculator?Is your meaning it Modem that isn't you that always break line?"
"Be not, I am to say
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